through half-open screens
crash against snow
shells
sand
carrying
with every white-trimmed length of frigid sea
salting the coast
soaking the contours
saving the cries
bitterness sails on a wind-swept afternoon
of flurried sunshine
frozen movement
sprays acrid
into numbing air
This one needs work with word choice....some spots are really rusty but then again, the block has been in place for some time now.
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